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TOEFL学習記録167

Usher Writing


Day 7

Movies and television have negative effects on young people.

Some argue that movies and television have negative effects on young people. Others contend that movies and television have positive effects on young people. If asked, both groups would present compelling reasons to corroborate their stances. First, movies and television provide children with educational and entertaining programs; second, by watching movies and television, children and family members share valuable times together. For these reasons, I believe that movies and television do not have negative effects on young people.

First, movies and television provide children with educational and entertaining programs. Educational programs on TV particularly are extremely instrumental to learning of children. When I was young, my favorite TV program was NOVA on the public broadcasting service. It featured many interesting scientific programs that always fascinated and enchanted me. These programs introduced me to the world of science and made a significant impact on my selection of my career as a researcher in a national laboratory. Movies and TV definitely gave me positive influence on me.

Second, by watching movies and television, children and family members share valuable times together. When I was young, my father and I watched football games on Sunday afternoons. We yelled at the opponent and supported our favorite team, Chicago Bears. My father and I have developed a very close relationship because of the time we shared by watching games on TV. I cannot imagine what the family life would be like without TV and movies.

It is true that pornography and violence presented by movies and television may have some negative impact on young people. However, parents can protect children from viewing such programs and movie theaters have measures for children not to watch violent and sexually explicit movies. First, movies and television provide children with educational and entertaining programs; second, by watching movies and television, children and family members share valuable times together. For these reasons, I believe that movies and television do not have negative effects on young people. The positive values of watching movies and television outweigh negative ramifications of watching violent and sexually explicit programs. (343 words)

27分で完了。もう少し余裕がほしいところ。
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