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TOEFL学習記録77

TOEFL essay No.7


The government should invest more money in children’s education than in college students. Agree or disagree?

Some may argue that the government should invest more money in college students, because students can major in specific fields, which will help students to find jobs after graduation. However, I am convinced that the government should spend more money on education of children, because every child has a right to receive education, children should learn ethical values at school, and more students go to private universities and colleges.

Firstly, every child, particularly those from poor families, should be able to go to school. To be specific, our national laws and regulations regarding education stipulate that every child between the 1st grade and 9th grade has a right to receive education and that the government shall pay major expenses for education including tuitions and textbooks. Therefore, the government should allocate more financial resources to children’s education so that every child has an opportunity to attend schools.

Second of all, children’s education provides young students with ethical values which form foundation for further development of each child. To be specific, when I was young, I had one class of morals and ethics every week and learned how to become good citizens, helping those who cannot help themselves, being punctual, obeying laws and rules, responsibilities, honesty, integrity, caring, and so forth. These ethical values I learned during my childhood played an important role in my life thereafter, and for this reason the government should provide more financial support to children’s education.

Last but not least, many students go to private universities and colleges. According to a statistics, approximately 80% of students in my country attend private universities and colleges, while higher than 90% of children attend state or municipal schools. Therefore, the government should allocate more money in children’s education.

In conclusion, as you can see from the examples I have provided, I agree with the statement that the government should invest more money in children’s education than in college students. Particularly, I want to reiterate the importance of teaching ethical values to young children, because the future of the country depends on those young children.
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